Re: [dns-privacy] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls.

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 31 August 2016 19:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls.
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On 8/31/16 1:54 AM, Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) wrote:
> Hi Allison,
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> Thanks for the review. Please see inline [TR]
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> *From:*Allison Mankin [mailto:allison.mankin@gmail.com]
> *Sent:* Wednesday, August 31, 2016 5:36 AM
> *To:* Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) <tireddy@cisco.com>
> *Cc:* Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>; dns-privacy@ietf.org;
> DPRIVE-chairs@tools.ietf.org; draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls@ietf.org;
> Allison Mankin <allison.mankin@gmail.com>; John Heidemann <johnh@isi.edu>
> *Subject:* Re: [dns-privacy] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsodtls.
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> My calendar reminds me this is the last day of this WGLC.
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> Overall comments:
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> This is a well-written spec.  I'm especially appreciative of how much
> the draft has gotten aligned with RFC 7858.  I support its publication
> soon as an Experimental.
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> Three suggestions/concerns:
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> Abstract and Section 1 -
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> I'd like to see a note added that the Experiment will be concluded when
> the spec is evaluated through an implementation and some testing of the
> details.
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> [TR] I am not sure if this line is required, I don’t see other drafts
> with Experimental status adding this line !
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WG Chair here.  In conversations with our A-D on this draft, the lack of 
any appearance of an implementation feels that this needs to be spelled 
out - one suggestion would be an "Implementation Section"

https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6982