Re: [dns-privacy] Last Call: <draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04.txt> (DNS Privacy Considerations) to Informational RFC

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Tue, 21 January 2020 15:51 UTC

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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
Date: Tue, 21 Jan 2020 10:50:56 -0500
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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] Last Call: <draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04.txt> (DNS Privacy Considerations) to Informational RFC
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On Mon, Jan 20, 2020 at 6:01 PM The IESG <iesg-secretary@ietf.org>; wrote:

>
> The IESG has received a request from the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG (dprive)
> to
> consider the following document: - 'DNS Privacy Considerations'
>   <draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04.txt> as Informational RFC
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
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> Abstract
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>    This document describes the privacy issues associated with the use of
>    the DNS by Internet users.  It is intended to be an analysis of the
>    present situation and does not prescribe solutions.  This document
>    obsoletes RFC 7626.
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>
>
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> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/
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> IESG discussion can be tracked via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/ballot/
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> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
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Looks good to me.  One grammar nit:

3.5.1.4.2.  DoH Specific Considerations
next to last paragraph
"Some implementations have, in fact, chosen restrict the use of"
change to:
"Some implementations have, in fact, chosen to restrict the use of"

-- 
Bob Harold