From nobody Thu Aug 31 11:48:44 2023 Return-Path: X-Original-To: dns-privacy@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: dns-privacy@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 606B3C15155E; Thu, 31 Aug 2023 11:48:40 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.91 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.91 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id jEh8_-m02XFI; Thu, 31 Aug 2023 11:48:40 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ppa3.lax.icann.org (ppa3.lax.icann.org [192.0.33.78]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 07BC7C151548; Thu, 31 Aug 2023 11:48:40 -0700 (PDT) Received: from MBX112-W2-CO-1.pexch112.icann.org (out.mail.icann.org [64.78.33.5]) by ppa3.lax.icann.org (8.17.1.19/8.17.1.19) with ESMTPS id 37VImciL023939 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT); Thu, 31 Aug 2023 18:48:38 GMT Received: from MBX112-W2-CO-1.pexch112.icann.org (10.226.41.128) by MBX112-W2-CO-1.pexch112.icann.org (10.226.41.128) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.2.1118.37; Thu, 31 Aug 2023 11:48:37 -0700 Received: from MBX112-W2-CO-1.pexch112.icann.org ([10.226.41.128]) by MBX112-W2-CO-1.pexch112.icann.org ([10.226.41.128]) with mapi id 15.02.1118.037; Thu, 31 Aug 2023 11:48:37 -0700 From: Paul Hoffman To: Dhruv Dhody CC: "ops-dir@ietf.org" , "dns-privacy@ietf.org" , "draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing.all@ietf.org" , "last-call@ietf.org" Thread-Topic: [Ext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-11 Thread-Index: AQHZ2CQvrveAggQhoUyxDfzZkyQXqrAFJD4AgAAJ5gCAAA5rAA== Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2023 18:48:37 +0000 Message-ID: <0B97E7E6-1F95-4EF7-8A92-EEBD6E56AFA1@icann.org> References: <169305778631.51777.3452361747442761670@ietfa.amsl.com> <04310F41-6926-4FDF-91E1-6DB305435EA6@icann.org> In-Reply-To: Accept-Language: en-US Content-Language: en-US X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [192.0.32.234] x-source-routing-agent: True Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-ID: Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Proofpoint-Virus-Version: vendor=baseguard engine=ICAP:2.0.267,Aquarius:18.0.957,Hydra:6.0.601,FMLib:17.11.176.26 definitions=2023-08-31_16,2023-08-31_01,2023-05-22_02 Archived-At: Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] [Ext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-11 X-BeenThere: dns-privacy@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39 Precedence: list List-Id: Addition of privacy to the DNS protocol List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2023 18:48:40 -0000 On Aug 31, 2023, at 10:57 AM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: > Thanks for taking my comments into consideration even though I tried kick= ing those pesky Can-o-worms :) Those cans sure are attractive sometimes... >=20 > Just one thing... >=20 >=20 >=20 > >=20 > > - Section 6.2, suggest to state clearly why modeling the probability is= listed > > under privacy consideration. This is not clear from the current text. >=20 > Added. >=20 >=20 > I did not see any change in 6.2=20 We changed "assess the value" to "assess the overall DNS privacy value" to = indicate why one would want to do the modeling. If you think we need to say= more, we can do so in the next draft. --Paul Hoffman