Re: [dns-privacy] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op

Shivan Sahib <ssahib@salesforce.com> Fri, 06 September 2019 05:31 UTC

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Date: Thu, 5 Sep 2019 22:31:44 -0700
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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op
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This is a bit late, and I'd sent some comments to Sara off-list (and I
wanted to actually contribute some text but haven't yet gotten the time
:(), but figured would send a quick note on-list as well.
In general I support the publication of this draft, though I echo Stephen's
comment about it needing a sample DPPPS? DROP? document. Minor comment: In
Section 5.2.1, pseudonymization and access control is mentioned, but might
be worth adding some text combining the two. I believe it's a fairly common
technique in practice, to comply with GDPR et al, where an employee has to
follow a process (either legal review or have a customer case or something)
in order to obtain access to unencrypted logs. Ryan Guest's talk at PEARG
at IETF 104 on log anonymization might be a good resource for additional
techniques (though I think most of them are covered in Appendix B):
https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/104/materials/slides-104-pearg-ryan-log-data-privacy-00






On Fri, Aug 16, 2019 at 4:50 AM Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>; wrote:

>
> This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op
>
> Current versions of the draft is available here:
> https://datatracker.ietf..org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/>
>
>
> The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practices
>
> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
> If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
> If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak
> out with your reasons.
>
> This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on: 30
> August 2019
>
> thanks
> tim
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