Re: [dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04.txt

Sara Dickinson <sara@sinodun.com> Thu, 16 January 2020 12:22 UTC

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Hi All, 

So the -04 update attempts to address as many of the comments as possible that arose during IETF LC along the lines Eric suggested. The change log is:

* Tsvart review: Add reference to DNS-over-QUIC, fix typo.
* Secdir review: Add text in Section 3 on devices using many networks. Update bullet in 3.4.1 on cellular encryption.
* Section 3.5.1.1 - re-work the section to try to address multiple comments. 
* Section 3.5.1.4 - remove this section as now covered by 3.5.1.1.
* Section 3.5.1.5.2 - Remove several paragraphs and more directly reference
  RFC8484 by including bullet points quoting text from Section 8.2 of RFC8484.
  Retain the last 2 paragraphs as they are information for users, not
  implementors.
* Section 3.4.2 - some minor updates made based on specific comments.

If there are still concerns about the content then I would be very grateful at this stage if folks could propose specific text to address issues so we can more quickly move forward. 

Regards

Sara. 


> On 16 Jan 2020, at 12:15, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : DNS Privacy Considerations
>        Authors         : Stephane Bortzmeyer
>                          Sara Dickinson
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04.txt
> 	Pages           : 28
> 	Date            : 2020-01-16
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes the privacy issues associated with the use of
>   the DNS by Internet users.  It is intended to be an analysis of the
>   present situation and does not prescribe solutions.  This document
>   obsoletes RFC 7626.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-04
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