Re: [DNSOP] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 10 October 2018 14:04 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13
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Erik, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Sep 26, 2018, at 3:57 PM, Erik Kline <ek=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Erik Kline
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13
> Reviewer: Erik Kline
> Review Date: 2018-09-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Major issues: none
> 
> Minor issues: none
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: just a few things that look like they may be typos
> 
> Section 2:  "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me.  "DNS node names" perhaps?
> 
> Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/?
> 
> Section 5: s/in the of/in the/?
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