Re: [DNSOP] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld

Andrew Sullivan <ajs@anvilwalrusden.com> Tue, 04 April 2017 21:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld
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Hi,

Thanks for the review.

On Sat, Apr 01, 2017 at 03:17:27PM -0500, Stephane Bortzmeyer wrote:
> Editorial :
> 
> Section 1:
> 
> "and that should not be resolved" I cannot parse it. Missing "it"?

Yes.

> 
> Section 5 :
> 
> After "and anyone watching queries along the path", add a reference to
> RFC 7626?

A good idea.  Thanks.

> Normative references:
> 
> Why is RFC 6303 a normative reference? It is no longer used.

Should be removed.  Thanks.

> Why is RFC 7686 a normative reference? It is just an example.

Yeah, we should move it.  Thanks.

A

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