[DNSOP] Benjamin Kaduk's Yes on draft-ietf-dnsop-server-cookies-05: (with COMMENT)

Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 13 January 2021 22:26 UTC

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Thank you very much for the updates in the -06; they
are just what I was hoping for!

I will note a couple nit-level editorial suggestions, though
I am sure the RFC Editor would find them as well.

Section 4

nit: s/Because DNS servers need to calculate/Because DNS servers need to recalculate it/

Section 8.2

nit: s/Portion of the structure/A portion of the structure/