[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08

[Peter Yee via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2024-04-26
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is yet another method for bootstrapping DNSSEC so that a
parent zone obtains the child zone DNS keys in a trusted manner. It deprecates
the bootstrapping scheme from RFC 8078. There are a few nits in the document,
but otherwise it appears fine. [Ready with Nits]

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

General: Add a comma after all occurrences of "i.e." and "e.g.". The current
usage is inconsistent in the draft.

Page 4, 1st full paragraph: change "in-bailick" to "in-bailiwick".

Page 13, section 9: insert "and" before "Paul Hoffman".