[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-11

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 08 August 2018 12:40 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-08-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1.  In section 2 the term DNAME is mentioned and while CNAME is specified DNAME
is not (maybe reference RFC6672?)

2. In section 5 "Most resorece record " typo.

3. This is more a comment and since I did not follow the progress of the
document I am not sure the motivation here. Reading the text I noticed that in
the definition of referrals in section 4 the text include also what looks to me
like logic starting from the third paragraph. I was wondering why is it here
and not in one of the standard track documents and referenced here. I saw that
this is a big change from RFC7719.