Re: [DNSOP] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-12: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: "Wessels, Duane" <dwessels=40verisign.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
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Thank you Duane for the quick reply and for taking into account my comments

Regards

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of "Wessels, Duane" <dwessels=40verisign.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Date: Wednesday, 7 October 2020 at 22:08
To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>
Cc: "draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest@ietf.org>rg>, Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>om>, "dnsop@ietf.org" <dnsop@ietf.org>rg>, "dnsop-chairs@ietf.org" <dnsop-chairs@ietf.org>rg>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Subject: Re:  Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-12: (with COMMENT)



    > On Oct 7, 2020, at 2:47 AM, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
    > 
    > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
    > draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-12: No Objection
    > 
    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > COMMENT:
    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > 
    > Thank you for the work put into this document. I really like the idea of
    > protecting the zone integrity even at rest.
    > 
    > Please find below one non-blocking COMMENT points and one nit. I would really
    > appreciate a reply for my comment about section 1.2.
    > 
    > I hope that this helps to improve the document,
    > 
    > Regards,
    > 
    > -éric
    > 
    > == COMMENTS ==
    > -- Section 1.2 --
    > Why is draft-ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls not mentioned in this section as an
    > alternative for data on the move?

    Just an oversight.  The document does (did) mention "a future version of DNS-over-TLS"
    which I think was meant as a reference to draft-ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls when that was
    just getting started.  Ben pointed this out as well and I suggest changing the text to this:

       The Transport Layer Security protocol suite also provides channel
       security.  The DPRIVE working group is in the process of specifying
       DNS Zone Transfer-over-TLS [I-D.ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls].


    > 
    > == NITS ==
    > -- Section 1.4.3 --
    > Suggest to add "(RPZ)" after the first use of the expansion.
    > 


    Done.

    DW