[DNSOP] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-03

Scott Hollenbeck via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 29 July 2024 13:10 UTC

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Reviewer: Scott Hollenbeck
Review result: Ready with Nits

I'm the assigned ART area reviewer for this draft. It's ready with only a few
small nits:

Section 5:

"More information about IANA's policies and procedures for how the
cryptographic keys for the DNS root zone are managed (also known as "DNSSEC
Practice Statements" or "DPSs") can be found at
https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures
(https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures)."

The URL is shown twice. The URL in parentheses can be removed.

The [DPS] reference includes this URL, with a reference year of 2020:

https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures

However, that URL leads to a page of policy and procedure statements. This is
the URL for the cited practice statement, with a reference year of 2024:

https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures/ksk-operator/ksk-dps-20240315.html

I tried to validate the XML examples using the RELAX NG Compact Schema provided
in Section 2.1 but was unable to find a working online validator. It all looks
correct, but I can't confirm that everything is valid.

[DNSOP] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dns… Scott Hollenbeck via Datatracker
[DNSOP] Re: [Ext] Artart last call review of draf… Paul Hoffman