[DNSOP] Comments on draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error version 10

Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Mon, 30 September 2019 12:46 UTC

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From: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se>
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Subject: [DNSOP] Comments on draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error version 10
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Section 1 ends with "Receivers MUST NOT change the processing of RCODEs in messages based on extended error codes" but it is not fully clear what that statement means in the light of the description in the beginning of the same section where the motivation for extended error codes is that the resolver cannot know what specific error that is behind, e.g., REFUSED and there does not know what the best next step is.

Both section 3.18 (filtered) and section 3.19 (prohibited) has code 17. In the registry table (4.2) it is code 17 and 18, respectively.

Both 3.14 (Cached error) and 3.20 (Stale NXDOMAIN answer) reports that the RCODE returned was taken from cached. In 3.20 it is described in detail what the resolver has done before the answer is returned, whereas in 3.14 there are not details at all.

3.14 needs more specification of when to use cached SERVFAIL.

I think that the last sentence in 3.20 ("This is typically caused [...] result of a DoS attack against another network") does not belong to a standard document.

In 3.22 it would be better to say that the operation or query is not supported ("Not supported"). As the text is now it is unclear by whom it is deprecated.

I suggest that the sentence "This may occur because its most recent zone is too old, or has expired, for example" is removed from 3.25 since there could be multiple reasons and it is not needed to give an example in a standard document.


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Mats Dufberg
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