[DNSOP] latest revisions of AS112 drafts -- editorials
Alfred Hönes <ah@TR-Sys.de> Tue, 06 October 2009 19:01 UTC
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Subject: [DNSOP] latest revisions of AS112 drafts -- editorials
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I'd like to mention the remaining few minor editorials I found still present in the re-posted AS112 drafts. [[ No new draft version(s) needed; that can be fixed by the RFC-Editor or during AUTH48 ! ]] a) First paragraph of 'Abstract' of both drafts: Please use common spelling in the prose: "RFC1918" --> "RFC 1918" b) help-help draft, Section 2, 2nd paragraph: Please s/to be be/to be/ Kind regards, Alfred.
- [DNSOP] latest revisions of AS112 drafts -- edito… Alfred Hönes