Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-13.txt

Thank you!

As these are nits I just went ahead and integrated them --
https://github.com/APNIC-Labs/draft-kskroll-sentinel/commit/ba6794afbb585664841e9e8500ae719092f21fe2#diff-9030ca57bd3260a4a1010c41307b185c

Thanks again,
  W

On Tue, Jun 5, 2018 at 12:16 PM Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> wrote:

>
> On Tue, Jun 5, 2018 at 6:09 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the
>> IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : A Root Key Trust Anchor Sentinel for DNSSEC
>>         Authors         : Geoff Huston
>>                           Joao Silva Damas
>>                           Warren Kumari
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-13.txt
>>         Pages           : 20
>>         Date            : 2018-06-05
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    The DNS Security Extensions (DNSSEC) were developed to provide origin
>>    authentication and integrity protection for DNS data by using digital
>>    signatures.  These digital signatures can be verified by building a
>>    chain of trust starting from a trust anchor and proceeding down to a
>>    particular node in the DNS.  This document specifies a mechanism that
>>    will allow an end user and third parties to determine the trusted key
>>    state for the root key of the resolvers that handle that user's DNS
>>    queries.  Note that this method is only applicable for determining
>>    which keys are in the trust store for the root key.
>>
>>    [ This document is being collaborated on in Github at:
>>    https://github.com/APNIC-Labs/draft-kskroll-sentinel.  The most
>>    recent version of the document, open issues, etc should all be
>>    available here.  The authors (gratefully) accept pull requests.  RFC
>>    Editor, please remove text in square brackets before publication. ]
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-13
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-13
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-13
>>
>>
> Looks good.
> A few nits:
>
>  4.1. Test Scenario and Objective
>
> "loose" -> "lose"
>
>
> 4.3. Test Procedure
> "The sentinel detection process test a DNS resolution environment with
> three query names:"
>
> Perhaps "tests" is better grammer?
> "The sentinel detection process *tests* a DNS resolution environment with
> three query names:"
>
> --
> Bob Harold
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