[DNSOP] Re: [OPS-DIR]Re: Opsdir ietf last call partial review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8624-bis-09

[Nabeel Cocker <[e-mail]>]

Hello Wes,

Your updates totally work!

thanks for the updates!

Regards,
Nabeel

On Tue, Apr 22, 2025 at 1:08 PM Wes Hardaker <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Nabeel Cocker via Datatracker <[e-mail]> writes:
>
> Hi Nabeel,
>
> > Section 1.2, paragraph 3:
> > ==========================
> > "This will allow for deprecated algorithms to become used less and less
> over
> > time."
> >
> > Perhaps say it like "This ensures that the use of deprecated algorithms
> > decreases over time."
>
> Done!
>
>
> > Section 2:
> > ===========
> > The last paragraph states
> >  The "Implement for" column values are transcribed from
> >    [RFC8624].  The "Use for" columns are set to the same values as the
> >    "implement for" ...
> > "implement for" has a lower case "i".
>
> Good catch, thanks.
>
> > Section 2:
> > ----------
> > The last paragraph states:
> >  The "Implement for" column values are transcribed from
> >    [RFC8624].  The "Use for" columns are set to the same values as the
> >    "implement for" values since the general interpretation to date
> >    indicates they have been treated as values for both "implementation"
> >    and "use".  We note that the values for "Implement for" and "Use for"
> >    may diverge in the future.
> >
> > The above text indicates that the "Implement for" and "Use for" columns
> should
> > have identical values. However, when I look at Table 2, there are
> differences
> > between the values in the "Implement for" and the "Use for" for number
> 5, 7, 8,
> > 10 and 13, For example, in number 5 where Use for DNSSEC Validation is
> > "RECOMMEND" but the Implement for DNSSEC Validation is "MUST"
>
> That's a good point and we don't discuss it in the document.  The WG
> wished to not use MUST and MUST-NOT for the Use for column, so we
> replaced them with RECOMMENDED.  As such, I added a sentence to the
> document that now says:
>
>    Note that the "Use for" columns values use "RECOMMENDED" when the
>    corresponding "Implement for" column is a "MUST" value.
>
> Does that work for you?
> --
> Wes Hardaker
> USC/ISI
>
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