[DNSOP]Re: AD Review of: draft-ietf-dnsop-qdcount-is-one
Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> Wed, 29 May 2024 13:56 UTC
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From: Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>
Date: Wed, 29 May 2024 06:56:28 -0700
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On Wed, May 29, 2024 at 6:03 AM, Ray Bellis <ray@isc.org> wrote: > On 28/05/2024 22:12, Warren Kumari wrote: > > Hi there, authors (and WG), > > Thank you for this document, I found it clear, useful, and an easy read. > > I do have a few comments/nits; addressing these now should help the IETF > LC and IESG evaluation go more smoothly. > > Please SHOUT loudly once you've had a chance to address these, and I'll > start IETF LC. > > LOUDLY! > HEARD! :-) > Questions / issues / comments: > 1: Can you please update the Abstract to clarify *how* the document > updates RFC1035? > > I think that something like: > "This document updates RFC1035 by {clarifying|specifying} that the QDCOUNT > parameter of a DNS Query must not be greater than one." or similar should > work. > > I've committed an update, albeit it it doesn't take the above verbatim > because it would've ended up -mostly- repeating the text that was already > there and in the title. > > The abstract now reads: > > This document updates RFC 1035 by constraining the allowed value of the > QDCOUNT parameter in DNS messages with OPCODE = 0 (QUERY) to a maximum of > one, and specifies the required behaviour when values that are not allowed > are encountered. > > If that suffices I'll actually upload that to the datatracker. > > I also took the opportunity to incorporate a trivial editorial nit spotted > by Tony Finch that was reported to us over the weekend. > Excellent - once you post the new version I will start IETF LC. I should notice the posting, but doesn't hurt to poke me too, just in case… W > cheers, > > Ray >
- [DNSOP]AD Review of: draft-ietf-dnsop-qdcount-is-… Warren Kumari
- [DNSOP]Re: AD Review of: draft-ietf-dnsop-qdcount… Ray Bellis
- [DNSOP]Re: AD Review of: draft-ietf-dnsop-qdcount… Warren Kumari