Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06.txt

Stephen Morris <sa.morris8@gmail.com> Fri, 01 November 2019 17:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06.txt
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A rather belated update of the draft based on comments received during the WGLC:

* Addition of a short paragraph clarifying that the underlying protocol has not changed, only the checking semantics (thanks to Bert Hubert for the suggestion).
* Correction of typos.
* Some minor changes to wording.

Stephen

> On 1 Nov 2019, at 17:15, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : Secret Key Transaction Authentication for DNS (TSIG)
>        Authors         : Francis Dupont
>                          Stephen Morris
>                          Paul Vixie
>                          Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
>                          Olafur Gudmundsson
>                          Brian Wellington
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 27
> 	Date            : 2019-11-01
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes a protocol for transaction level
>   authentication using shared secrets and one way hashing.  It can be
>   used to authenticate dynamic updates as coming from an approved
>   client, or to authenticate responses as coming from an approved name
>   server.
> 
>   No recommendation is made here for distributing the shared secrets:
>   it is expected that a network administrator will statically configure
>   name servers and clients using some out of band mechanism.
> 
>   This document obsoletes RFC2845 and RFC4635.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06
> 
> 
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