Re: [DNSOP] requesting WGLC for 5011-security-considerations

Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net> Thu, 06 July 2017 17:40 UTC

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From: Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net>
To: Michael StJohns <msj@nthpermutation.com>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] requesting WGLC for 5011-security-considerations
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Michael StJohns <msj@nthpermutation.com>; writes:

> I'm sure you think that... but the small changes you've made to
> address some of my comments haven't gone far enough.  There's also a
> need for a grammar and syntax pass on the document.

Thanks for the review and suggested text (the previous messages you sent
didn't provide as many concrete fixes, so we can now incorporate you
exact issues now that they're more directed).  We'll try to put together
an update to address the issues you've pointed out shortly (which really
can't happen till Monday of IETF since we're after cut-off).
-- 
Wes Hardaker
USC/ISI