Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 26 May 2021 12:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02
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Joel, thank you for your review and thank you all for the following discussion. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2021-5-14, at 23:34, Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2021-05-14
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard.
> 
> I do have two questions that I hope has already been considered by the WG and
> is a non-issue.  See minor issues.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 1) I presume IANA has been involved in the development of this document, and is
> willing to undertake the maintenance?  I looked for but did not see where that
> was noted. 2) I question the use of enumerations for the content.  I understand
> that since IANA will generate new YANG modules when there is a change, the new
> models can have new values.  I am concerned that if an implementation using the
> older schema reads data from a DNS repository with updated entries (and the
> corresponding updated version) the version skew will cause processing errors
> instead of simply handing over the numeric value in a fashion that is
> acceptable but not understood.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
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