Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-sutld-ps-04.txt

[Andrew McConachie <[e-mail]>]

On 5/16/17 17:42, Ted Lemon wrote:
> Would the following change address your concerns?
>
> Section 4.1.1., paragraph 3:
> OLD:
>
>      o  The Internet requires a globally unique namespace
>
> NEW:
>
>      o  The Internet requires a globally unique namespace: a namespace in
>         which any given name refers to the same information (has the same
>         meaning) no matter who requests that information and no matter
>         from which specific name server they request it.
>
>
> Section 4.1.1., paragraph 4:
> OLD:
>
>      o  Private networks may operate private namespaces, but still require
>         that names in the public namespace be globally unique.
>
> NEW:
>
>      o  Private networks may operate private namespaces, with names that
>         have meanings only locally (within the private network) but still
>         require that names in the public namespace be globally unique.
>
>
> This is to the paragraphs preceding the one you commented on, but I think it does a good job of introducing the concepts used in the paragraphs you commented on, in a fairly natural way.
Yes. I think it makes clear to the reader what is _meant_ by 'meaning' 
throughout the document.

Thanks,
Andrew