Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10.txt

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Thu, 07 June 2018 17:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10.txt
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On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:43 PM Tom Pusateri <pusateri@bangj.com> wrote:

> This updated version adds some minor changes requested by Warren including
> anycast clarifcation, a new RFC reference, and IANA helpers.
>
> Tom
>
>
> > On Jun 7, 2018, at 1:38 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the
> IETF.
> >
> >        Title           : DNS Stateful Operations
> >        Authors         : Ray Bellis
> >                          Stuart Cheshire
> >                          John Dickinson
> >                          Sara Dickinson
> >                          Ted Lemon
> >                          Tom Pusateri
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10.txt
> >       Pages           : 53
> >       Date            : 2018-06-07
> >
> > Abstract:
> >   This document defines a new DNS OPCODE for DNS Stateful Operations
> >   (DSO).  DSO messages communicate operations within persistent
> >   stateful sessions, using type-length-value (TLV) syntax.  Three TLVs
> >   are defined that manage session timeouts, termination, and encryption
> >   padding, and a framework is defined for extensions to enable new
> >   stateful operations.  This document updates RFC 1035 by adding a new
> >   DNS header opcode and result code which has different message
> >   semantics.  This document updates RFC 7766 by redefining a session,
> >   providing new guidance on connection re-use, and providing a new
> >   mechanism for handling session idle timeouts.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10
> >


Minor nit:

In the added paragraph, the line:
"If after the connection is, the client's assumption"

Needs another word, like 'resumed' or 'recreated' or such:
"If after the connection is recreated, the client's assumption"

-- 
Bob Harold