Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis

Matthew Pounsett <matt@conundrum.com> Fri, 08 November 2019 13:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis
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On Thu, 31 Oct 2019 at 11:48, Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
> If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
> If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak
> out with your reasons.
>

Just a nit:
In Appendix B4, is the extra indenting of "fallback-enabled" intentional?
I'm not as familiar with Unbound syntax, but that looks odd to me.