Re: [DNSOP] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec3-guidance-08: (with COMMENT)

Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net> Mon, 09 May 2022 15:40 UTC

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From: Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec3-guidance-08: (with COMMENT)
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Robert Wilton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> writes:

> One minor point, I found it slightly confusing in various places as to whether
> "iterations" meant "total number of interactions" or the "iterations parameter"
> that refers to the number of extra interactions.  Hence I would suggest
> changing "iterations" to "iterations parameter" or "extra iterations" or "total
> iterations" in various places depending on the context to ensure that this it
> is clear/obvious in all places.

Thanks Rob, I can see where people less familiar with the NSEC3 protocol
could easily get misled and will look at the wording throughout the document.
-- 
Wes Hardaker
USC/ISI