Re: [DNSOP] The DNSOP WG has placed draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements in state "Call For Adoption By WG Issued"

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From: Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com>
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Hi Bob,

Thanks for the comments. The new version of the file is available here [1] and diff can be seen at [2].

I propose the following text. Does it clarify the concern ?
Avoiding the configuration file to be updated prevents old configuration file to survive to writing error on read-only file systems.


"Not updating the configuration file prevents a failed
   synchronization to to the absence of write permission that are hardly
   in the control of the software."

<mglt>
</mglt>

[1] https://github.com/mglt/draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements/blob/master/draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements.mkd
[2] https://github.com/mglt/draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements/commit/f8ab674b12442aff6ba3c72a3ca8f795f24b2df9#diff-c7cc8f0bdd4d7cce2082828d70d2bf35
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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
Sent: Monday, May 4, 2020 4:29 PM
To: Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com>
Subject: Fwd: [DNSOP] The DNSOP WG has placed draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements in state "Call For Adoption By WG Issued"

Minor nits:

7.  Trust Anchor Related Recommendations

Last sentence, last few words:
"in section Section 8" > "in Section 8"

<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>

7.2.1.  Automated Updates to DNSSEC Trust Anchors

"TA updates is" > "TA updates are"

<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>

"but due to human" > "due to human"

<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>

7.2.2.  Automated Trust Anchor Check

"Not updating the configuration file prevents a failed
   synchronization to to the absence of write permission that are hardly
   in the control of the software."

<mglt>
I propose the following text. Does it clarify the concern ?
Avoiding the configuration file to be updated prevents old configuration file to survive to writing error on read-only file systems.
</mglt>

Seems confusing, please rewrite.

"The TA can be queries" > "The TA can be queried"

<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>

"does not only concerns" > "does not only concern"
<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>
"if the mismatch result" > "if the mismatch resulted"
<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>

8.  Negative Trust Anchors Related Recommendations

"disable the signature check for that key the time" > "disable the signature check for that key until the time"
<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>

"This does not prevents" > "This does not prevent"
<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>
"either an attack or a failure into" > "either an attack or a failure in"
<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>
10.1.  Automated Reporting

"will take the appropriated steps" > "will take the appropriate steps"
<mglt>
addressed
</mglt>
--
Bob Harold


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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu<mailto:rharolde@umich.edu>>
Date: Mon, May 4, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Subject: Re: [DNSOP] The DNSOP WG has placed draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements in state "Call For Adoption By WG Issued"
To: IETF DNSOP WG <dnsop@ietf.org<mailto:dnsop@ietf.org>>


Looks useful, I will review.

--
Bob Harold


On Mon, May 4, 2020 at 3:13 PM IETF Secretariat <ietf-secretariat-reply@ietf.org<mailto:ietf-secretariat-reply@ietf.org>> wrote:

The DNSOP WG has placed draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements in
state Call For Adoption By WG Issued (entered by Tim Wicinski)

The document is available at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-mglt-dnsop-dnssec-validator-requirements/


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