[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Issues

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2021-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard.

I do have two questions that I hope has already been considered by the WG and
is a non-issue.  See minor issues.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
1) I presume IANA has been involved in the development of this document, and is
willing to undertake the maintenance?  I looked for but did not see where that
was noted. 2) I question the use of enumerations for the content.  I understand
that since IANA will generate new YANG modules when there is a change, the new
models can have new values.  I am concerned that if an implementation using the
older schema reads data from a DNS repository with updated entries (and the
corresponding updated version) the version skew will cause processing errors
instead of simply handing over the numeric value in a fashion that is
acceptable but not understood.

Nits/editorial comments: