Re: [DNSOP] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09

Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> Sun, 07 May 2017 04:24 UTC

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From: Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>
Date: Sun, 07 May 2017 04:24:15 +0000
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09
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Good catch -- these were included in the IETF Last Call notice, and there
was discussion with the chairs and responsible AD. They will be noted in
the downref registry; however, the write-up should have included a mention
of this. I've CCed the chairs / will ask the AD to update the write-up for
completeness...

W



On Mon, May 1, 2017 at 4:44 AM Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:

> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2017-04-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-27
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25
>
> Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a Proposed
> Standard RFC
>
> Major issues:
>     Procedural - ID Nits notes that there are normative references to
> RFCs 7129 and 7719.  Those are informational RFCs.  The shepherd
> writeup does not note these downrefs.  (I see this was also noted by
> Jouni Korhonen, but I do not see a resolution.)
>
> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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>