Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Fri, 01 November 2019 13:51 UTC

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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
Date: Fri, 1 Nov 2019 09:51:40 -0400
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis
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On Thu, Oct 31, 2019 at 11:48 AM Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis
>
> Current versions of the draft is available here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis/
>
> The Current Intended Status of this document is: Information
>
> Also, Barry Leiba will act as Responsible AD on this document.
>
> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
> If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
> If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak
> out with your reasons.
>
> If there are normative issues, agenda time at IETF106 will be set aside to
> address them
>
> This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on:  15
> November 2019.
>
> thanks
> tim
>
>
Looks good to me.

One minor nit:
2. Requirements
"Another method to have the resolver" -> "Another method is to have the
resolver"
(add the word "is" to make it read better)

-- 
Bob Harold