Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-00.txt

Peter Thomassen <peter@desec.io> Fri, 22 April 2022 20:54 UTC

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On 4/22/22 20:46, Bob Harold wrote:
> Minor edit:
> 
> In "1. Introduction", third paragraph, first sentence:
> " these dependencies result often result "
> the first "result" should be removed.
Thanks for catching this! I pushed a fix that will be included in the next version.

Best,
Peter

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