Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf

Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer@nic.fr> Fri, 06 July 2018 15:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
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On Mon, Jun 25, 2018 at 12:27:17PM +0200,
 Benno Overeinder <benno@NLnetLabs.nl> wrote 
 a message of 27 lines which said:

> This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf

I've read -10 and it seems OK. It solves a real issue, and does it
properly.

Editorial: I would prefer all occurrences of "right-most" to be
replaced by "most general", to emphasize that it is not the position
which matters, it is the closeness to the root.

Editorial: 'that is they are the "top" of a DNS branch, under a
"parent" domain name.' I assume that "top" is used instead of "apex"
because the sentence does not always refer to the top of a zone?