Re: [DNSOP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error-14.txt> (Extended DNS Errors) to Proposed Standard

Hi,

My apologies for getting in some minor comments so late. I do not suggest
any technical changes. However, at least to my eye, there are some little
glitches and editorial changes I would suggest.

Among the glitches I see are incorrect internal cross references, old
implementation key word boilerplate, no specification for assignment policy
for one range of INFO-CODE values, misspelled words, etc. Editorial changes
are somewhat of a matter of taste. In any case these are also marked in the
attached.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Thu, Mar 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM The IESG <iesg-secretary@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> The IESG has received a request from the Domain Name System Operations WG
> (dnsop) to consider the following document: - 'Extended DNS Errors'
>   <draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error-14.txt> as Proposed Standard
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
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> Abstract
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>    This document defines an extensible method to return additional
>    information about the cause of DNS errors.  Though created primarily
>    to extend SERVFAIL to provide additional information about the cause
>    of DNS and DNSSEC failures, the Extended DNS Errors option defined in
>    this document allows all response types to contain extended error
>    information.  Extended DNS Error information does not change the
>    processing of RCODEs.
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> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error/
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Re: [DNSOP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error-14.txt> (Extended DNS Errors) to Proposed Standard

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