[DNSOP] Re: [Ext] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis-06

[Dirk Hugo <[e-mail]>]

Hi Paul
I am fine with that, thanks!
Best regards
Dirk

On Mon, Aug 19, 2024, 5:06 PM Paul Hoffman <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Thanks for the review! Those nits are the kind of thing the RFC Editor
> picks up, so unless we have to revise the document for the IESG, we'll let
> them catch them during the editorial process.
>
> --Paul Hoffman
>
> On Aug 19, 2024, at 06:23, Dirk Von Hugo via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
> wrote:
> >
> > Reviewer: Dirk Von Hugo
> > Review result: Ready with Nits
> >
> > Dear all,
> > I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
> draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis.
> > These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
> Area
> > Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments
> just
> > like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and
> resolve
> > them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received.
> For more
> > details on the INT Directorate, see
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/
> >
> > Though not being a DNS expert I think that the document is very useful,
> well
> > written, and complete for the time being to help improve security and
> > reliability of DNS practice. I have only few very minor suggestions for
> IMO
> > improved readability:
> >
> > P.1:
> > current NS Resource Record Set => current Name Server (NS) Resource
> Record Set
> >
> > P.3:
> > for the IN class. => for the Internet class (IN class). /perhaps add
> ref. (e.g.
> > to RFC 1034)
> >
> > P.4:
> > Therefore, it is important that resolvers be able to => Therefore, it is
> > important that resolvers are able to
> >
> > P.8:
> > and it gets a query => and it receives a query
> >
> > Thanks and best regards
> > Dirk
> >
>