[DNSOP] Re: [Ext] [DNSOP]Requesting final comments on draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 06 June 2024 23:11 UTC

Return-Path: <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4A179C151089; Thu, 6 Jun 2024 16:11:58 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -7.094
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-7.094 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, URIBL_DBL_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id FBuvNuycDO3X; Thu, 6 Jun 2024 16:11:54 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-lf1-x131.google.com (mail-lf1-x131.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::131]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 (128/128 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 2117EC1388B9; Thu, 6 Jun 2024 16:11:54 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-lf1-x131.google.com with SMTP id 2adb3069b0e04-52b936c958dso1828760e87.0; Thu, 06 Jun 2024 16:11:54 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20230601; t=1717715512; x=1718320312; darn=ietf.org; h=cc:to:subject:message-id:date:from:in-reply-to:references :mime-version:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=mFmepMGMBOuQiwbqcy49XNc+5PXX/MSA8zxWvtdr6z8=; b=Bpbpcf+O1inJiDP/KO6LrXj9n+1GlebhwKMhPFh5MR8BORczW82xrjF/sC1SKDKo7V jWNfwZ+8I4UNUHRQ6zEdT8y28rhErva+BJGMXMG2K1+cvMiX1esR+nEaEsJMYDrNMqS2 ITo1f/PUXAOCMkSfXwRpj+7qCrcMeFrH1a3EiTz4EN1g8APAGrWwZY8RXClGOGpMcTpr 6iUWwrv+UOddPcmw7bgINYWdgpI9ma1G8PbFffkIORSrMI+e1qdDKE3E/Dnw4341RQke FE+t0vKx91lriQJXM0YxaBk8gEszBNA4lwVTQweJ501Qfq/ybGiArqfjLHGYAwwH9JGa wXSA==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20230601; t=1717715512; x=1718320312; h=cc:to:subject:message-id:date:from:in-reply-to:references :mime-version:x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id :reply-to; bh=mFmepMGMBOuQiwbqcy49XNc+5PXX/MSA8zxWvtdr6z8=; b=mXd9kwHeV2nCpCuKpUtYjg3SRoiSyY9jkHBK+vIGkBfiK0s+/6QaBsM3JYNMV9E3I2 RHH7vrM0hWLzmWialWkYVoSdzVm17AobPktkI0pI2t47tpJYSegdmv0BrFyAjPgdoAA3 +UY24ooNIWsnCVdkyTBjUQEIryJsqNrnyPPdaTB1yQfF88utge5nfJmzAVZOS3IAwAOA CFcrCJbOPCn5+Idb65F8wJL65ZaWCrPljcMVRMSiaZ6rvDcvSB17gBxaB7GCHouIRFCy VJ1F2Na6C96DcpADqSZhwt8B4tQ6rTlSDAScn1F4pbfQ6LZXQpb+8XEHZn8abhl8KPal ckxQ==
X-Forwarded-Encrypted: i=1; AJvYcCVfqSYfrHiCtjaRLnk2me+LFjsv7dkzlaHdpy5/AwYReRLRBdlgFSmRiI23v5p+oUW3zQJd0a7aAP6rCrEyjrw1zRVM7YE=
X-Gm-Message-State: AOJu0YzQthf32J5z8G0JVaJflhFvVrfoDodsFHJ7S9Hil93b445NutEn 0foCHBm2ldmZjHErdgnoC+DENyqeCA0AjmaC3Eesk1b61R3RAZiOIgXK9aHDpQVL3WsxWHWICOW KQp/g3jTr+p6cZuGxSmcQLG5Ef64rew==
X-Google-Smtp-Source: AGHT+IHV3HWsYMaILlPAxbLzeM01OKfBcGupEAMKbFs/o6DOzSs/TCbiRpmJu1D8+G2oIGO6f9louJdZvYjTs1yEMBo=
X-Received: by 2002:ac2:5b84:0:b0:52b:8909:58c1 with SMTP id 2adb3069b0e04-52bb9fe0b88mr532570e87.59.1717715511834; Thu, 06 Jun 2024 16:11:51 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
References: <CADyWQ+HLxyAkhdYsOEQz09ByF5EtuvDMh2oAWb_tt_c7YN+59A@mail.gmail.com> <3B172CF5-F76C-4B21-984D-F19CF5B40F48@icann.org>
In-Reply-To: <3B172CF5-F76C-4B21-984D-F19CF5B40F48@icann.org>
From: Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 06 Jun 2024 19:11:40 -0400
Message-ID: <CADyWQ+HzeoSZqZh9WCCY6ZfLnmRziFOeUyX7ZdSQmqBw_w1WFA@mail.gmail.com>
To: Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@icann.org>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="000000000000e880c2061a40ce54"
Message-ID-Hash: WU6RFK5TER24NWHDFS7FICDBUUX7FCF2
X-Message-ID-Hash: WU6RFK5TER24NWHDFS7FICDBUUX7FCF2
X-MailFrom: tjw.ietf@gmail.com
X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; emergency; loop; banned-address; member-moderation; header-match-dnsop.ietf.org-0; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header
CC: dnsop <dnsop@ietf.org>, dnsop-chairs <dnsop-chairs@ietf.org>
X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.9rc4
Precedence: list
Subject: [DNSOP] Re: [Ext] [DNSOP]Requesting final comments on draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis
List-Id: IETF DNSOP WG mailing list <dnsop.ietf.org>
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/a81F2yuOwdAY2p5RP3CAcjqJiZ4>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/dnsop>
List-Help: <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Owner: <mailto:dnsop-owner@ietf.org>
List-Post: <mailto:dnsop@ietf.org>
List-Subscribe: <mailto:dnsop-join@ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <mailto:dnsop-leave@ietf.org>

Paul


On Wed, Jun 5, 2024 at 12:28 PM Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@icann.org> wrote:

> Tim jumped the gun by about an hour: we just submitted the -05. It
> incorporates the suggested text from below; you can see the diff at:
>
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis-05


I am guilty as charged.  But our comment on we would like people to review
the changes.

>
>
> FWIW, this new text is somewhat based on the findings from NLnetLabs and
> SIDN on a project supported by ICANN. You can see the report, and an
> earlier report on a related topic, at:
>
> https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/octo-commissioned-documents-2020-11-05-en
>
> Please let us know if you have any issues with the changed text in the new
> version.
>

Thank you for incorporating those changes.

However, I do have one small nit:

  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8499 (Obsoleted by RFC 9499)

thanks


tim



> --Paul Hoffman
>
>
> On Jun 5, 2024, at 08:25, Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > All
> >
> > The chairs are requesting some final comments on
> draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis. As you might recall, this document has already
> been through WGLC and had consensus to advance, but our AD reviewed it and
> raised some additional questions. (Warren Kumari, “AD Review of
> draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis,” email to the list on 31 January.)
> >
> > Here are specific things we particularly want feedback on:
> >
> >
> > -Discussion on the list suggested a change regarding the use of the TC
> bit in the context of a priming response, which appears in the -04
> (current) version of the document but hasn’t been reviewed by the full WG:
> >
> > OLD:
> > Note that [RFC9471] updates [RFC1035] with respect to the use of the TC
> bit.  It says "If message size constraints prevent the inclusion of all
> glue records for in-domain name servers, the server must set the TC
> (Truncated) flag to inform the client that the response is incomplete and
> that the client should use another transport to retrieve the full
> response."  Note, however, the root server addresses are not glue records,
> so setting the TC bit in truncated responses from the root servers is not
> required by [RFC9471].
> >
> > NEW:
> > Note that [RFC9471] updates [RFC1035] with respect to the use of the TC
> bit.  It says "If message size constraints prevent the inclusion of all
> glue records for in-domain name servers, the server must set the TC
> (Truncated) flag to inform the client that the response is incomplete and
> that the client should use another transport to retrieve the full
> response."  Because the priming response is not a referral, root server
> addresses in the priming response are not considered glue records.  Thus,
> [RFC9471] does not apply to the priming response and root servers are not
> required to set the TC bit if not all root server addresses fit within
> message size constraints. There are no requirements on the number of root
> server addresses that a root server must include in a priming response.
> >
> > Willem's email to the list which suggests changes to section 3.3 to
> better explain what is signed when; the chairs feel that these changes
> should be incorporated into the draft as well
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/D2Ha-Hk2lpvvkcXx7k4RILpgaPQ/ [
> mailarchive.ietf.org]
> > The addition of a reference to RSSAC 0028 (
> https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/rssac-028-03aug17-en.pdf,
> “Technical Analysis of the Naming Scheme Used For Individual Root Servers,”
> as an informative reference; it discusses the rationale for not signing
> root-servers.net [root-servers.net]
> >
> >
> > We liked to hear from the WG on this by Friday June 14, 2024.
> >
> > Thanks
> > tim, et al
>
>