Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
Dave Crocker <dcrocker@bbiw.net> Fri, 06 July 2018 15:39 UTC
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From: Dave Crocker <dcrocker@bbiw.net>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
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Stephane, thanks for the comments. Inline... On 7/6/2018 8:22 AM, Stephane Bortzmeyer wrote: > On Mon, Jun 25, 2018 at 12:27:17PM +0200, > Benno Overeinder <benno@NLnetLabs.nl> wrote > a message of 27 lines which said: > >> This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf > > I've read -10 and it seems OK. It solves a real issue, and does it > properly. > > Editorial: I would prefer all occurrences of "right-most" to be > replaced by "most general", to emphasize that it is not the position > which matters, it is the closeness to the root. So let's start by making sure we're seeking the same goal: reader comprehension. While I can imagine there is phrasing that is better than right-most, to achieve that comprehension, I believe 'most general' isn't it. My impression has been that 'right-most' is the most common phrasing people have used over the years. > Editorial: 'that is they are the "top" of a DNS branch, under a > "parent" domain name.' I assume that "top" is used instead of "apex" > because the sentence does not always refer to the top of a zone? 'zone' is almost certainly not the term to apply here. While it encompasses a sub-tree, its boundary is not explicit in a domain name. The DNS is a hierarchy. I would have though 'top of a sub-branch' was therefore clear, concise and accurate. Again, if there is other phrasing that is more established, we should use it. But I'm not used to seeing 'apex', though it's certainly a more erudite choice... d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Stephane Bortzmeyer
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… John R Levine
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… John Levine
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Ray Bellis
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… John R Levine
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Ray Bellis
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… John Levine
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Paul Hoffman
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Paul Hoffman
- [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-d… Benno Overeinder
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… John Levine
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dick Franks
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Benno Overeinder
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Jan Včelák
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Tim Wicinski
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Benno Overeinder
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Ondřej Surý
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Ondřej Surý
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dick Franks
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dick Franks
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… John Levine
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Tim Wicinski
- Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ie… Dave Crocker