Re: [DNSOP] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnsop-tcp-requirements

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Thu, 22 April 2021 18:50 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 22 Apr 2021 14:50:41 -0400
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnsop-tcp-requirements
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Hi,

This is a good document and I support publication.

However, I do have some comments. I scanned the Last Call comments by
others, and they mostly seem like improvements, but some of my
comments below may duplicate others for which I apologize in advance.


Section 3, last paragraph: Cut out wishy-washy superfluous words. Be bold!
OLD
vice-versa.  However, it is the aim of this document to argue that
BETTER
vice-versa.  However, this document argues that
BEST
vice-versa.  However,


Although Cookies are mentioned in this draft with a reference to the
RFC 7873, it would be good to work in the point that the Cookies RFC
recommends use of TCP whenever Cookies are not available as a way to
get some of the benefits of Cookies. Thus, if I remember correctly,
someone following that RFC would use Cookies or, when they are not
available, TCP.


Section 9, last paragraph: Don't be so negative :-)
"not unlike" -> "similar to"


Make the name of Section 2 a bit more explicit, something like
"History of DNS over TCP"


Section 1.1: Update as per RFC 8174.


Lots of references are good but I find it disturbing that all
technical references are shown as Informational. I think a lot of them
should be moved to Normative.


Thanks,
Donald
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On Sun, Apr 18, 2021 at 7:17 PM Suzanne Woolf <suzworldwide@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Dear colleagues,
>
>
> This message starts the Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-tcp-requirements (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-tcp-requirements/)
>
> Since this draft has not been recently discussed in the WG, we figure people might need to swap it back in, and we’re requesting BCP status. So the WGLC will end in three weeks (instead of the usual two), on 3 May.
>
> Substantive comments to the list, please. It’s fine for minor edits to go direct to the authors.
>
> We’d like to advance this but it needs some active support, so we need to hear from folks who have found it useful, especially implementers.
>
>
> Thanks,
> Suzanne
> For the chairs
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