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Paul Hoffman:

> Tim jumped the gun by about an hour: we just submitted the -05. It  
> incorporates the suggested text from below; you can see the diff at:
>    https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8109bis-05

this changed text is much more clear to me.

Andreas

