Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix

"Paul Hoffman" <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org> Wed, 27 June 2018 22:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix
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Due to its nature, the document is a bit difficult to read, but I don't 
have any suggestion about how to make it better. The only problem I have 
with the document is that there are lots of informational references 
that are not referred to in the body of the text; they are not even 
listed in the Updates list at the top of the document. This should 
either be explained clearly in the body of the document or removed.

--Paul Hoffman