[DNSOP] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-04-30
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-27
IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25

Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard RFC

Major issues:
    Procedural - ID Nits notes that there are normative references to
RFCs 7129 and 7719.  Those are informational RFCs.  The shepherd
writeup does not note these downrefs.  (I see this was also noted by
Jouni Korhonen, but I do not see a resolution.)

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: