Re: [DNSOP] RFC 2845bis draft

"Peter J. Philipp" <pjp@centroid.eu> Thu, 28 February 2019 09:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] RFC 2845bis draft
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Hi again,

Well I ended up fixing it myself yesterday through a lot of trial and 
error and finally understanding the

RFC.  I recommend the following change to make it easier for future 
implementors in the 2845bis draft:

Section 6.4 says:

The first envelope is processed as a standard answer, and subsequent 
messages have the following digest components:

I would rewrite that as:

The first envelope is processed as a standard answer (see section 6.2), 
and subsequent messages have the following digest components:

With the referal to section 6.2, a hasty eye can catch what a "standard 
answer" is and assumptions are left out.

BTW I'm working with this draft document:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis/?include_text=1

Best Regards,

-peter


On 2/27/19 9:21 AM, Peter J. Philipp wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I'm in contact with the original RFC 2845 authors for clarifications 
> on what is meant in section 4.4 for the meaning of "Prior MAC 
> (running)".  In the bis draft this is in section 6.4 and seems 
> unchanged.  I'm having a hard time understanding this as an 
> implementor, this is an area that needs clarification I believe.
>
> Would you like to see any results that I glean from the authors so 
> that this can be put on the bis draft?
>
> Best Regards,
>
> -peter
>