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Re: [DNSOP] The DNSOP WG has placed draft-dupont-dnsop-rfc2845bis in state "Candidate for WG Adoption"

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Mon, 13 November 2017 15:28 UTC

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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
Date: Mon, 13 Nov 2017 10:28:38 -0500
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] The DNSOP WG has placed draft-dupont-dnsop-rfc2845bis in state "Candidate for WG Adoption"
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On Mon, Nov 13, 2017 at 4:11 AM, IETF Secretariat <
ietf-secretariat-reply@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> The DNSOP WG has placed draft-dupont-dnsop-rfc2845bis in state
> Candidate for WG Adoption (entered by Tim Wicinski)
>
> The document is available at
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dupont-dnsop-rfc2845bis/
>

Some minor wording suggestions:

The last paragraph of 1.  Introduction

"   Since the publication of first version of this document ([RFC2845]) a
   mechanism based on asymmetric signatures using the SIG RR was
   specified (SIG(0) [RFC2931]) when this document uses symmetric
   authentication codes calculated by HMAC [RFC2104] using strong hash
   functions."

I think "when" should be "where" (or "whereas").

In 4.3.  TSIG Record Format

"its name actually only need only
         be meaningful to them"

Remove the first 'only'

-- 
Bob Harold

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