[DNSOP] further problems with draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-09

Geoff Huston <gih@apnic.net> Tue, 27 March 2018 23:28 UTC

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Subject: [DNSOP] further problems with draft-ietf-dnsop-kskroll-sentinel-09
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While I am reviewing this version of the draft, the other problem I see is a block of text that reads:

"RFC 8145 relies on resolvers reporting the list of keys that they have to root servers.”

The grammatical construction is ambiguous - I suspect that whoever originally submitted this tect back for the -03 version meant to say:

"RFC 8145 relies on resolvers reporting towards the root servers a list of locally cached trust anchors for the root zone.”

The document also makes the comment: "The authors (gratefully) accept pull requests.”. I suspect a more prudent course of action from now on is that “The authors will refer all pull requests to this working group before applying any changes to the draft.”

Geoff