[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09

Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 12 September 2020 22:09 UTC

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Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2020-09-12
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with  few nits.

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
s3.3:  The
Nits/editorial comments: