Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf

"Paul Hoffman" <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org> Mon, 25 June 2018 17:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
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On 25 Jun 2018, at 3:27, Benno Overeinder wrote:

> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
> If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
> If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please
> speak out with your reasons.

The document seems ready for standardization. I haven't read it in a 
while, and it seems fine. Two small editorial notes:

The second paragraph of Section 1.1 puts RRsets in quotes, but it is not 
clear why. Either the quotes should be removed, or they should be 
explained.

The third paragraph of Section 1.1 says that RFC 6376 uses 
"_domainkeys". In fact, it uses "_domainkey".

--Paul Hoffman