Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-06.txt

[Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]>]

Hi Stephane,

Sorry for slow response, I've been traveling on vacation.

On Sat, Oct 24, 2015 at 3:49 PM, Stephane Bortzmeyer <[e-mail]> wrote:
> On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 05:33:49PM -0400,
>  Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]> wrote
>  a message of 59 lines which said:
>
>> This revision incorporated editorial improvements and improvements in
>> explanatory and motivational text based on comments on the WG mailing
>> list.
>
> I've read it and diffed it and I believe it is OK. Section 5.2 is now,
> IMO, much clearer and it addresses the problem reported in
> <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/QrrLtnCXhVI8usZsvAd5PU_b1Y4>,
> thanks.

Thanks.

> Editorial: "correct souce addresses" -> "correct source addresses",
> "improves the probablity" -> "improves the probability". Also, "a
> client MUST send client COOKIEs" is not a consistent casing of
> cookie. It should be Client Cookies, to follow the convention of the
> rest of the draft. Same thing for "a server MUST send server COOKIEs".

OK.  I could produce an updated draft with fixes for those typos to
upload during IETF meeting week but I'm not sure if other changes are
desired.

Thanks,
Donald
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