[DNSOP] Re: [Ext] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-03

[Paul Hoffman <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the review!

On Jul 29, 2024, at 06:10, Scott Hollenbeck via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> "More information about IANA's policies and procedures for how the
> cryptographic keys for the DNS root zone are managed (also known as "DNSSEC
> Practice Statements" or "DPSs") can be found at
> https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures
> (https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures)."
> 
> The URL is shown twice. The URL in parentheses can be removed.

This is an artifact of how the XML is rendered in text. It shows fine in the HTML.

> The [DPS] reference includes this URL, with a reference year of 2020:
> 
> https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures
> 
> However, that URL leads to a page of policy and procedure statements. This is
> the URL for the cited practice statement, with a reference year of 2024:
> 
> https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures/ksk-operator/ksk-dps-20240315.html

The page at <https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures> lists two DPSs, one for the KSK and one for the ZSK. I would prefer to retain the shorter URL so that readers can see both. However, thanks for noticing the bad date of 2020: we will remove the date from the document.

> I tried to validate the XML examples using the RELAX NG Compact Schema provided
> in Section 2.1 but was unable to find a working online validator. It all looks
> correct, but I can't confirm that everything is valid.

It's always good to check. I don't know of any online validators, but I have just checked with `jing`, and the example does indeed validate with the compact RNG. (Thanks to Tim Bray for pointing me at this tool!)

--Paul Hoffman