[DNSOP]Re: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08: (with COMMENT)

[Peter Thomassen <[e-mail]>]

Hi Roman,

Thank you for your review.

Incorporated changes will show up in the -09 revision (will be published later today) and are part of this PR: https://github.com/desec-io/draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping/pull/15

Details below.

On 5/12/24 23:43, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> Thank you to Peter Yee for the GENART review.
> 
> ** Section 6.  Editorial.
>     The level of rigor in Section 4.2 is needed to prevent publication of
>     a half-baked DS RRset
> 
> Is “half-baked DS RRset” a term-of-art?  To improve readability, I recommend
> not using an idiomatic expression.

Replaced with "ill-conceived".

> ** Section 7.  Editorial. Per the reference to
> [draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping], this should likely be something like
> “[This RFC]” and subsequent comment of that string being replaced by the RFC
> Editor.

Done.

> ** idnits reports:
>    ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8499 (Obsoleted by RFC 9499)

Done.

Best,
Peter

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