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Re: [DNSOP] [Ext] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec3-guidance

Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@icann.org> Fri, 25 March 2022 16:19 UTC

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I have re-read this document after not reading it for a long time. It is in excellent shape and should be sent to the IETF to become a BCP.

One note: the first paragraph in Section 2.4 is misplaced. Section 2 is about considerations while Section 3 is about recommendations. The first paragraph of Section 2.4 should be moved to Section 3.1, probably as the second paragraph there.

I'm sending the authors some strictly-editorial proposals in the repo.

--Paul Hoffman

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