Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-06.txt

[Paul Vixie <[e-mail]>]

dave, HEREIS. --paul

[e-mail] wrote:
> ...
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-06
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in: 1. Introduction

s/resource records/resource record types/ (two occurrences)

in: 1.1. _Underscore Scoping

s/existing resource record/existing resource record type/
s/specific resource records/specific resource record sets/
s/[RFC1035]/[RFC952]/ (first occurrence)
s/above the underscore/above the underscored/

in: 1.2. Scaling Benefits for TXT, SRV, and URI Resource Records

s/SRV,//; S/"SRV",//
OR s/Some resource records are generic and support a variety of uses.//;
    s/Their use can scale poorly.*different uses\.//;
    s/increasingly-popular//; s/approach,/approach/

s/records/record types/
s/RR/RRset/ (note, leave "RR"s alone)
s/RRs/RRsets/

in: 2. DNS Underscore Scoped Entry Registries Function

s/specific resource records/specific resource record types/
s/one or more RR records/an RRset/
s/such records/such RRsets/
s/other resource records/other RRsets/
s/applications/applications using the same resource record type/
s/listed resource record/listed resource record type/
s/RR,/RR type/
s/table of names/table of RR types and names/
(table needs to be fixed to add an RR Type column)
/name space/name space, just as every RR type owns a distinct, 
subordinate name space./

in: 2.1. DNS Underscore Global Scoped Entry Registry Definition

s/RR:/RR Type:/
s/the RR/the RR type/
s/References/References:/
s/Each RR/Each RR type/

in: 3.1. DNS Underscore Global Scoped Entry Registry

s/first/right-most/
s/(RR)/(RR Type)/
s/RR/RR Type/ (in table)

in: 3.2. Guidance for Expert Review

s/resource record/resource record type/ (three occurrences)

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P Vixie