Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf

"John Levine" <johnl@taugh.com> Fri, 13 July 2018 03:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf
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In article <c1b7b9dc-91be-7092-22c4-0f3309f27b9a@dcrocker.net> you write:
>https://www.dropbox.com/sh/iex14dfnieq5dfq/AAAsedMLheGdBh6qbwm7tpcAa?dl=0

Overall, looks good.  The text in the new section on wildcards is
mildly fractured, looks like a cut and paste error.