Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional-02.txt

Shumon Huque <shuque@gmail.com> Tue, 27 July 2021 23:27 UTC

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Date: Tue, 27 Jul 2021 19:26:52 -0400
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional-02.txt
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On Tue, Jul 27, 2021 at 11:43 AM Puneet Sood <puneets=
40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> A readability suggestion
> * Move the description of all types of glue upfront before getting
> into recommendations.
> - real glue
> - sibling glue
> - loops with sibling
> - orphaned glue
> * Describe the recommendations for including glue.
> This should also call out the scenario where different kinds of
> glue/referrals are present in a response (glue, sibling glue). This is
> implicit in the wording now.
>

These are good suggestions Puneet. Thanks!

Shumon.